March 24, 2013
On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 12:22:37 UTC, deadalnix wrote:
> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 11:49:17 UTC, Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
>> On 3/24/13 7:32 AM, deadalnix wrote:
>>> I finally decided to write a post about such imaginary "sufficiently
>>> smart compilers" that clearly don't exists today, never will and so we
>>> have to clutter the language :
>>> http://www.deadalnix.me/2013/03/23/a-story-about-optimization-llvm-and-the-sentinelinputrange/
>>>
>>>
>>> I really hope that someone wrote this imaginary LLVM thing everybody is
>>> talking about !
>>
>> Looking great (also love the page design). The piece has a few systematic English language errors that should be easy to fix. Would you want to accept a copyedit step from a native speaker, and if so, is anyone here inclined to do that?
>>
>
> I'd be happy to, if someone want to do it.


Native English speaker here; I'd be happy to edit for grammar.
March 24, 2013
On 3/24/13 9:07 AM, John Colvin wrote:
> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 12:22:37 UTC, deadalnix wrote:
>> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 11:49:17 UTC, Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
>>> On 3/24/13 7:32 AM, deadalnix wrote:
>>>> I finally decided to write a post about such imaginary "sufficiently
>>>> smart compilers" that clearly don't exists today, never will and so we
>>>> have to clutter the language :
>>>> http://www.deadalnix.me/2013/03/23/a-story-about-optimization-llvm-and-the-sentinelinputrange/
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I really hope that someone wrote this imaginary LLVM thing everybody is
>>>> talking about !
>>>
>>> Looking great (also love the page design). The piece has a few
>>> systematic English language errors that should be easy to fix. Would
>>> you want to accept a copyedit step from a native speaker, and if so,
>>> is anyone here inclined to do that?
>>>
>>
>> I'd be happy to, if someone want to do it.
>
>
> Native English speaker here; I'd be happy to edit for grammar.

Great, please go ahead! Something that worked for my reviewers was to just email a bunch of "before" -> "after" sentences, e.g.:

* "Developers want code that run fast." -> "Developers want code that runs fast."

* "And this is how the SentinelInputRange get into the discussion." -> "And this is how the SentinelInputRange gets into the discussion."

...


Andrei
March 24, 2013
On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 12:22:37 UTC, deadalnix wrote:
> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 11:49:17 UTC, Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
>> On 3/24/13 7:32 AM, deadalnix wrote:
>>> I finally decided to write a post about such imaginary "sufficiently
>>> smart compilers" that clearly don't exists today, never will and so we
>>> have to clutter the language :
>>> http://www.deadalnix.me/2013/03/23/a-story-about-optimization-llvm-and-the-sentinelinputrange/
>>>
>>>
>>> I really hope that someone wrote this imaginary LLVM thing everybody is
>>> talking about !
>>
>> Looking great (also love the page design). The piece has a few systematic English language errors that should be easy to fix. Would you want to accept a copyedit step from a native speaker, and if so, is anyone here inclined to do that?
>>
>
> I'd be happy to, if someone want to do it.

I copied and pasted in to libreoffice for editing: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/910836/sentinal.odt  or  http://dl.dropbox.com/u/910836/sentinal.doc


There are 2 comments from me, they are in [] and highlighted in yellow. You'll probably want to address them and then delete them.

There were a lot of grammatical mistakes that have now been fixed and a couple of sentences have been rearranged. I had planned to work as Andrei suggested with "before -> after" but I quickly realised the edit file would be longer than the document!

P.S.
I may have accidentally introduced some British English by accident, perhaps a native American English speaker will spot them.
March 24, 2013
On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 14:37:18 UTC, John Colvin wrote:
> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 12:22:37 UTC, deadalnix wrote:
>> On Sunday, 24 March 2013 at 11:49:17 UTC, Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
>>> On 3/24/13 7:32 AM, deadalnix wrote:
>>>> I finally decided to write a post about such imaginary "sufficiently
>>>> smart compilers" that clearly don't exists today, never will and so we
>>>> have to clutter the language :
>>>> http://www.deadalnix.me/2013/03/23/a-story-about-optimization-llvm-and-the-sentinelinputrange/
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I really hope that someone wrote this imaginary LLVM thing everybody is
>>>> talking about !
>>>
>>> Looking great (also love the page design). The piece has a few systematic English language errors that should be easy to fix. Would you want to accept a copyedit step from a native speaker, and if so, is anyone here inclined to do that?
>>>
>>
>> I'd be happy to, if someone want to do it.
>
> I copied and pasted in to libreoffice for editing: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/910836/sentinal.odt  or  http://dl.dropbox.com/u/910836/sentinal.doc
>
>
> There are 2 comments from me, they are in [] and highlighted in yellow. You'll probably want to address them and then delete them.
>
> There were a lot of grammatical mistakes that have now been fixed and a couple of sentences have been rearranged. I had planned to work as Andrei suggested with "before -> after" but I quickly realised the edit file would be longer than the document!
>
> P.S.
> I may have accidentally introduced some British English by accident, perhaps a native American English speaker will spot them.

That is much better now. Thank a lot, I updated the article.
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