Ok, I've made a few changes.  Perhaps some of the things I added should be tips.  It's in html now, but I've discovered that my html editors have stopped working (xp -upgrade), so I simply used word (yuk).  It shouldn't be a problem to convert it to standard html/xhtml later though.
 
I don't mind the constructive criterions. I fact I'm suprised any of them got though at all (note to self - better double check that dogy code and gramma).  I didn't spend to much time writing them. I hoped it would just spark others off.
 
On another note, parhaps someone should start a hints and tips (or tips and tricks) list. Just to get a big collection of them which you (or someelse)  can sort though for the first issue.
 
Over
 
PS
I was just reading though this neat webpage - interesting about programming personality,  some of it is opinion based, but it's still good.
http://homepage.mac.com/kevinmarks/personality.html